Desuge Imouto 27

Author: Inaida Sou
Translator: Kei of ChocoCats
Proofreader: Cinnamon (Thank you very much)

● 191 DAYS AGO

(This is Makoto’s POV)

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Mai’s bento-making wouldn’t seem to end. 

“Fuahhh~” 

On our way to school, Mai gave a big yawn. She carried her school bag on her left shoulder and her lunch bag in her hand as I clasped her right hand in mine.

“Sleepy?” 

“Yeah… I have History in the first period today, so maybe I’ll sleep then…” 

Mai’s eyes were half-open as she moved her legs, seemingly by instinct. 

Because she kept making bentos, Mai always seemed sleepy in the morning. The frequency of her being in a daze on the way home increased as well.

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“Well, History can easily be reviewed later.” 

If she felt sleepy, she didn’t have to make bentos. That would be the exemplary answer, the words I have to pass on as a good brother. 

Back then, I would have been able to say that without hesitation, but I didn’t feel like saying it now. For some reason, I didn’t even understand why. As an older brother, saying that would be the best thing to do. I couldn’t do what I wanted to and it frustrated me. Should I just push Mai off from somewhere like the pedestrian bridge instead?

(T/N: when killing someone is easier than understanding your own feeling – Makoto)

When I stole a glance at Mai, I saw her lunch bag in her hand. The school bag slung over my right shoulder also contained a lunch bag of a different colour and with different contents. 

Even though I shouldn’t have been able to tell it apart from the weight of my textbooks, I could feel a certain weight from the lunch bag I was carrying.

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“Oh, right. Can we stop by the supermarket on our way home today? I need some ingredients for the bentos.” 

“Alright.” 

When I replied, Mai, smiled happily and said, “Great!”. Looking at that smile, I felt frustrated. 

“Today’s bento is great, but tomorrow’s bento will be even better.” 

“… Okay.” 

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Mai sacrificed her time to make bentos for me. On the other hand, all I could do was thank her. I felt frustrated about it.

Before, I found it troublesome to help and thank others, and I would only do it if it was beneficial to me. There were only two types of people: those who I felt might benefit me, and those who would annoy me. 

However, when it came to Mai, I felt frustrated. 

Why couldn’t I say “thank you” sincerely? Wasn’t there anything I could do? I kept thinking about that. How unpleasant. I climbed the stairs of the pedestrian bridge with Mai as a haze filled my head.

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T/N: Hello, as Makoto’s chapters are short, I can finish early. And I got help from Cinnamon as a proofreader too, so it’s getting a bit easier. Thank you very much for helping, Cinnamon-san!

So, what do you guys think of the flow of the story now that we have a proofreader? I hope it is even easier to understand and nicer to read than before!

Anyway, because it’s short and I was excited by how kind Cinnamon-san explained to me how to use the right wording to sound better for the reader, I finished translating 2 chapters, so enjoy chapter 28 too!


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5 thoughts on “Desuge Imouto 27

  1. Thanks for the dohble chapters coco! Yep it was nice before too but translation is a bit more smoother now!

  2. Thank you for the chapter! I did notice that this one was smoother, so I think Cinnamon is a good addition to the team. Your translations have always been good, though 🙂

  3. Thank you for the double chapters!! Watching Makoto slowly change is so satisfying :3
    Also i noticed that the text repeats from ‘when i stole a glance at Mai..’

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